Wednesday, October 28, 2015

We Over Diagnose ADHD and it Ticks Me Off

Attention Deficit Hyperactive Disorder, or ADHD, is marked by the inability to focus, tendency for constant motion, and impulsivity. Unfortunately, these are the same symptoms of another serious condition: childhood. In the video we watched last Friday during class the narrator noted how the increase of young children, especially elementary school age children, has increased in correlation with the number of standardized tests children are forced to take. Teachers, desperate for their students to attain high scores on these standardized tests, are forced to sequester their students inside classrooms where they sit at desks and learn in such a way that is completely stagnant.

Children are energetic creatures. They are in the earlier years of their physical and psychological development and as such their body produces more energy than that of the average adult already fully grown. As students, being kept inside a classroom all day with only an hour at maximum to run outside and play, children are unable to burn off the excess energy their body is naturally producing. As a result of all this pent up energy, children feel the constant need to move. They jiggle their feet, wiggle in their chairs, if an authority figure yells at them for constantly moving the movement become internal, flitting from one idea to the next, and teachers, having to be responsible for 30 of the small humanoids tell the parents that they should have their child checked for ADHD because what else are they supposed to do?

So, the parent takes the child to a psychiatrist for screening and more often than not they child tests positive for ADHD symptoms. I myself remember my own screening process when I was eleven years old. I was, thankfully, tested at an age where most of my classmates were beginning to settle down in the classroom. I, on the other hand, was not, so I was given little pills that really did help. However, with the growing popularity of diagnosing kids as having ADHD so has the number of kids diagnosed while still in elementary school. This is ridiculous. Children are by their very nature hyperactive and they don’t have the experience to reign in their impulsivity. They want to go out and do and see and explore because everything is new to them. Pumping these children full of pills is not helpful to them nor does it help the individuals who actually do have ADHD.

ADHD is caused in large part by the brain’s inability to process and produce certain chemical reactions which is why it is called a disorder, because something isn’t quite working right. Scans have shown that there is actually a physical difference between a normal and an ADHD-positive brain but because it is over diagnosed in children and associated with behaviors that are markers of childhood it is not taken seriously as a mental disorder. More times than I can count I have had classmates claim they know they are ADHD simply because they are feeling especially hyper that day. They use something that I have to struggle with every day as an excuse for their disruptive behavior. They laugh and they joke andnothing makes me angrier. But it is the social perception. ADHD is a joke simply because “everyone has it”. It’s somehow become the universal disorder and that needs to stop.


I do not believe a child should be screened for ADHD before middle school at the earliest. Instead,
the educational system should be reminded that children are bouncing balls of energy. Standings in the corporate world have been shown to do wonders for the productive power of adults, they can easily be incorporated in classrooms as a way to help children burn off excess energy. Desks that are basically stationary bicycles with flat tops on them have also been shown to be effective in promoting children’s ability to focus on the task at hand. I do not believe that medicating students into submission is the answer, rather better understanding and accommodation of children’s physiology is required.

Sunday, October 25, 2015

5 Terms

This week's prompt was to list five terms from our keyterms that we are not quite sure of. As I was scrolling through the document I noticed that, while I understood and could define some words,  could not do so when considering them from the viewpoint of composition and those words are the ones I have chosen to include in this list. Thank you in advance for your comments.
  1. Authority
  2. Empowerment
  3. Genre Theory
  4. Intertextuality
  5. Evaluation

Sunday, October 18, 2015

If I Had to Make a Syllabus in My Nightmares


Technology is the classroom is an incredibly hot topic. Should students have computers? How young is too young to allow students to have computers in the classroom? The first time I used a computer in the classroom I was in 5th grade. I don’t remember the assignment but I do remember the excitement of getting to use a laptop for the first time. The librarian rolled the big gray cart into the classroom and handed out big, clunky black laptops with little red dots at the center of the keyboard for a mouse. It was definitely one of the more exciting days of my elementary school career.

That was the starting point. From then on we used computers more and more frequently in the classroom until, finally, in college I was allowed to bring my computer with me to class every day for note taking and general use. The older I got the more my teachers and then professors incorporated technology into their lessons plans. One of the most noticeable examples of this was in high school when we started writing research papers or giving presentations that required PowerPoints. Similarly, in the nightmares where I find myself teaching I include such assignments that require the use of technology. Of course, in my nightmares I’m always teaching younger students just beginning to understand how technology can be applied to schoolwork when all they’ve ever known is the entertainment value of their parents’ iPad’s so my answer might not fulfill this week’s blog prompt—“What is one assignment you will include in your syllabus assignment that uses collaboration and/or technology and/or other things Yancey, Selfe, Breuch, Bruffee, or Shaughnessey have discussed”—but I’ll try.

Kids these days are growing up knowing technology, knowing how to use it and therefore don’t need to be taught the mechanics of it necessarily. What is necessary for students to understand early on is how the technology they love can apply to their academics. Book reports were once done with cardboard posters and cutouts. Now they can be done with PowerPoint presentations, videos or any number of such mediums. Such mediums can then be utilized as way to encourage students to be comfortable speaking in front of others, something I myself am very much not.

Allowing the students to choose their medium for such presentations is also a good way to teach them about what platforms work best for different presentations. PowerPoint is the obvious easy way out because it’s a tried and true favorite but I would try to impress on my students that a PowerPoint is much more than just putting up words and pictures on the screen which is something I think a lot of students don’t quite understand. A PowerPoint is not something you can just read off of because that makes for literally the most boing presentation in history. I should know, I spent all of sophomore year of high school being taught by a guy who that was all he did.

 As for using a video, if they were to do that I would ask them to act out what they think is the most important scene in their chosen book and then, after the class watched the video, have them stand up and explain their choice. This would allow them to work in groups because each student who helped another student with a video would get extra points on their own report thus encouraging teamwork as well as incorporating the use of technology into the classroom at an early age.

Sunday, October 11, 2015

I'm Adulting!

Something that has captured my interest these past few weeks. Well that could be a number of things too numerous to list. I guess if I had to pick just one it would be the image of defending the tower when we discussed the teaching of the English language.

When I think of a tower I always think Rapunzel trapped, hidden away from the word, the only human interaction she had being with the witch who would climb up her long golden hair. Imagine how that affected her as a person, how much that would have stunted her growth. Is that the kind of relationship we want English to have with the world?

I know it’s not part of our class’ assigned readings but in his article “Do You Speak American?” Robert MacNeil discusses the wide variety to be found in modern day American English and how the different cultures in this melting pot of a country have influenced that variety. This variety, he says, is not a bad thing. He directly addresses the misconceptions the public has regarding the varied pronunciations of the same words as well as explaining how misplaced the stigma is that accompany those pronunciations.  In doing this he is attempting to both broaden the reader’s understanding of the English language in America and change any negativity they might hold toward certain demographics that use English in a way that is different than them.

Another article that discusses the different dialects of American English is John Simon in his article “Why Good English is Good for You”. Now, anyone who has actually read this particular article understands that, while Simon’s argument is valid he says it in such a way that he comes across as a complete prick. He bemoans what he considers the improper use of the English language and antagonistically places blame directly upon those who teach English.

Both Simon and MacNeil are discussing the development of the English language but they come at the subject from two completely different points of view. MacNeil sees the growth of language as something that helps bring people closer together. He’s open minded and encouraging. Simon, on the other hand, is almost antagonistic. He belongs firmly with the garrison defending that tower in which Rapunzel was imprisoned.

This talk of defending the tower, I feel, is very limiting. Like Rapunzel held captive, a tower-like construct when dealing with English stunts the development of the language. Even Simon admits that language in and of itself is an ever-growing, ever-changing entity. To keep it locked up in a tower is…well, at the very least it is unproductive.

Monday, October 5, 2015

Nidhi's "Philosophy of Teaching Composition"

On September 27 I turned in an extended analysis assignment for this class. My group analyzed plagiarism in the form of a podcast. My classmates turned in written assignments. For this blog post we were instructed to read and analyze one of our classmates’s extended analysis. I chose Nidhi Kaith’s “Philosophy of Teaching Composition”.

Nidhi discusses in her extended analyses the idea that truth is not something that can be taught but can be discovered. The imagery of discovering is powerful and speaks to independence in the student that cannot be achieved if the teacher is dictating what the student can learn. It also creates the image of a partnership. The teacher is the student’s partner and guide without controlling what the student learns but allowing them to learn for themselves.

Nidhi goes on to detail her three core beliefs in the teaching of writing, the first of which is “the power of reading”. She cites Stephen Krashen’s “The Power of Reading” who claims that the real problem Americans face in their literary failings “is not that Americans cannot read and write, “…they just don’t read and write very well.” (ix).” Nidhi goes on to explain Krashen’s assessment that “The reason why students cannot write well is that they do not read” and links this lack of reading negatively impacts ones cognitive ability, a sentiment that I agree with completely. She likens reading to exercising the brain and explains that “Good readers are also at an advantage as reading automatically strengthens their grammar, vocabulary, and spelling.” As a result of an extensive vocabulary and proper grammar, the student gains credibility, another fact that is proven true time and time again when I visit supposedly reputable web sites and find grammatical and spelling mistakes. Instantly I find myself doubting the authenticity of whatever piece of new I am reading and well as that websites credibility as a whole.

The second core belief of her teaching philosophy Nidhi discusses is “the power of language” by connecting the power of reading to its effects on a student’s ability to write. She believes that “reading is by far the best way of learning how language works, of how language doesn’t work, of developing one’s command over the language, and of learning how to use language in one’s writing to produce meaning.” It through reading, she says, that perhaps she can induce the “itch of literature” which “nothing can cure…but the scratching of a pen” as described by Samuel Lover. Through this itch she hopes to combine literature and composition. An example she gives of accomplishing this is by having her students read journalistic works and analyzing how language works in different media platforms. This, she says, is a practice that students not only need in order to be successful in this world but one the value of which she hopes to impress upon her students so they can continue it for years to come.

Of course, the power of language doesn’t stop with reading critically composition. Nidhi knows that the act o writing is an equally important aspect. She notes that students often see writing as a chore, something that, because it seems like such a basic skill, when they don’t succeed right away they become discouraged and come to resent writing. To counter this she advocates the removal of grading as a way to judge a student’s progress. This is a sentiment I support whole heartedly. This is the first year I am actively grading students’ written responses and I don’t like it. We assign students these grades and while we do provide commentary for the student why they earned that grade there isn’t an opportunity for the student to learn from their mistakes and resubmit the assignment. As Nidhi says, “Honest feedback of the teacher should be the medium to learn how to write.” As I stated in my earlier blog post “Learning to Write Well is a Process” the act of writing is not something that has just one answer and takes practice, constant revision but because students are handed these grades and not given the opportunity to learn from their mistakes they quickly become discouraged. What’s more, it actively stops them from exploring all they can do with writing. Nidhi says it perfectly: “To force students to do a specific kind of writing with good grades as their ultimate aim, defeats the purpose of writing.” This drive for good grades completely misses the point of writing: to express oneself.

Nidhi’s third and last core belief is “the recognition of the presence of multiculturalism in our classrooms.” I find this an interesting concept to include as a core belief, especially her statement that “a good teacher ought to recognize the presence of a globalized classroom.” She goes on to explain this as the necessity that a teacher recognize that each student is an individual with experiences and cultural backgrounds unique to each of them. I like this idea, especially when she connected it to her earlier argument that allowing students to express themselves through their writing, thus giving them an outlet to showcase their unique experiences and culture. She also makes the point that international students, for whom English is a second or even third language, often need more help than those for whom English is their first and sometimes only language. I couldn’t agree more and I had firsthand experience with this last week when I participated in the 1301 tutoring session on Thursday. As usual, we were instructed to only spend roughly 15-20 minutes with each student so that every student would have a chance to work with a tutor however, the first two students I helped were non-native English speakers (one of them had only learned English last year! I was thoroughly impressed). Because of their lack of familiarity with English (not to say they weren’t fluent, only they didn’t have the many, many years of practice of the other students) I spend more than just 20 minutes working with them so make sure they understood the assignment.

Nidhi proposes having students work in small groups comprised of both international and American students as a way to give international students a way to learn from their peers who have been speaking English all their lives. While I agree with her that “students feel more comfortable learning new things around their peers” there is still the small problem that American students are learning the subject too and as a result might not be the best sources for international students who are learning how to write. The same could be and has been said about peer reviews. Of course, the interactions between American and international students in these small groups provides the opportunity for the two sets to learn from each other in other ways. Douglas McGray argues for the inclusion of multiculturalism in the American school system in his article “Lost in America”. Nihdi’s suggested multicultural small groups provides a means for students to learn about a foreign culture from their peers, promoting empathy for those who live and experience the world in such a different way than their own. Perhaps an assignment the small groups can be set is the writing of a paper about the different cultures present in that group.

Throughout her “Philosophy of Teaching Composition” Nidhi clearly outlines her core beliefs and provides explanations why she gives them so much importance. She also provides examples of how she would incorporate these values into her lessons. I believe her suggest regarding the grading system has more merit than what we can see. The same can be said for multicultural small groups though I, personally, would caution from using those small groups as a way to teach too often. Overall, I really like Nidhi’s philosophy in the teaching of composition.